After attending friday's screening of our work so far, I felt confident in what I could do to improve my piece. Simon suggested allowing all 3 clips to run at the same time rather than pausing each one, which tends to make the piece not flow. In addition to this, there were slight editing errors with the shadows and the phones which needed to be resolved. In addition to this, he also suggested removing the green screen phone at the end, as it didn't look right. This constructive criticism has helped me think about my idea a little bit more and I am going to go off and think about ways in which I could improve my piece further.
Monday, 31 March 2014
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